About Robyn
Robyn Openshaw is the author or editor of 10 titles, including the bestselling book
The Green Smoothies Diet, the children's book,
The Adventures of Junk Food Dude, and the course
12 Steps to Whole Foods. She’s passionate about overthrowing the Standard American Diet by teaching people to eat more whole foods easily, inexpensively, and deliciously. She’s the mom of 4 competitive athletes as well as a runner, cyclist, skier, and competitive tennis player. She travels all over the world speaking to sold-out audiences and studying non-toxic cancer treatment for her next project.
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I really liked the pink in the other one.
I like this one much better. Perhaps the orange can be pink??
Two suggestions
1) make that
Green
Smoothie
Girl.com
so they know where to get more info.
2)
for a tag line
Ask me about green smoothies?
or
Ask me about smoothies?
or
Ask me about my smoothies?
Yes, I’d wear this one.
I like this one much better!
Yeah I like that one too. But I don’t wear regular T shirts much. Hopefully you’d have the fitted versions.
I don’t like the font. You should play with it to get a more original looking font, as opposed to stock. It’s getting there, but could use some revisions. It still looks generic.
Hey, Robin, I think you are getting there. My only suggestion would be to have the GSG in a different font than the green smoothie girl part. I always like to use two different fonts in my designs just to add some interest. I love the leaves with the water droplets!
I really like this logo too. It’s fresh and fun, but simple and to the point. And I agree with Crystal… the water droplets are great!
I like this one a lot better. I think having “GSG” and “Green Smoothie Girl” in the same logo is a bit too much. Perhaps there could be two variations… or drop “GSG” all together.
hmm better but still not there–I agree about the green smoothie girl.com –I like to think I am promoting the ideas here and not you and your body inparticular….ya know?!! maybe I’m wrong–I do not like drink your salad atall–it sounds sick to me–not at all appetizing like green smoothies are!
The designers in the contest we sponsored don’t even know me–so, certainly not MY body that ended up in that other logo. I definitely want the idea in anything we do on the site does that you can be your healthiest, loveliest, most energetic self by eating whole foods. That’s all.
I like this one much better. I think pink and green are overused. For a tag line how about “Green Smoothies, a glass of fresh!” . Love the water drops, makes it look, juicy. I would wear it on a t shirt, because I tend to go on and on about GS is anyone wants to listen.
I would definately wear this one before the sexy one. I agree that you should put “.com” on GreenSmoothieGirl. Someone else commented on a different font for the “GSG”, which is a good idea, you just want to keep it readable. Maybe just make one of the letters different, like put the S in a sexy font.
I like this one better: clean, fresh, & simple. Not a fan of the font, though.
I like the other one better….If you take off the girl….but I like the layout and colors better. It’s more fun and bright and cheerful.
I like this one better then the first.. I do Like Wendi’s Tag Line “a glass of Fresh .” Like the water droplets too.. I like the colors.. could be use on different color shirts. I would preferr to not have the GSG.. Just Green Smoothie girl in the circle.. then Green smoothie girl .com and Wendi’s “a glass of Fresh”…
I prefer this one as well. And like the suggestions made in the previous posts. To, me the .com would be “cluttery”. If the name is googled, ‘you’ will be found. That’s how I found this site.
I agree that you should add “.com” to the second version. I like the logo, and I liked the sexy one too!
Trying to tweak and create a logo “by committee” never works in my opinion. Adjusting fonts and colors like crazy won’t work because you’ll always have someone who doesn’t agree, right? I just did this at work and the whole thing turned out to be a mess when we started asking everyone what they thought. Also, it worked out better when we started giving the designers objective-oriented feedback like “It needs to look more corporate” instead of “It needs a different font.”
Anyway, just my 2 cents. The logo is only as good as the brand behind it. I say, just pick one and people will support it (although clearly the sexy logo doesn’t appeal to your current readers, a sexy alternate version of the logo might appeal to a different type of audience as the company continues to expand…so you don’t have to throw that idea out the window).
I agree with the .com, water droplets, not liking the GSG font & I don’t like the orange. I would like to see the green with purple or another dynamic color. Or maybe green & yellow for lemons and limes. I also agree that it’s almost there but I would like to see other designs too before I made my mind up. It’s nice but does not WOW me!
What they said; this one has more class. I would want a long sleeve option. Although my favorite color is yellow, and the association with lemons and limes is good, I think yellow would get lost on a white tee. Maybe a berry color or plum… I prefer this design over the other one.
I like it. I hope you would have girl fitted t-shirts.
I also agree that .com should be added. The water droplets are great! The round shape and the font are too boring. I also don’t like the orange – you use blue on your website – why not stick to that (CI)? The logo is nice but could use some improvement.
P.S. I loved the “Drink your Salad” quote or a “Glass of Fresh”. That could be added and the GSG left out.
I think you should have GreenSmoothieGirl.com on the back of the shirt, and focus the attention on the front with the smoothie and vegetables and fruits on the side of a tall green smoothie glass with a straw sticking out of it. The focus in my opinion should be the greens. This looks too much like a label and attention to the “real” cause is lost.
I love your YOUTUBE segments. Will continue to watch those and learn.
Put that zest into your T-shirts. What you are on YOU Tube should come across in your shirts.
Thanks for all that you do to teach us about healthier eating and “drinking.”
Love the logo…don’t like the font. Those are my favorite colors…so I like that. I like what CB said about having fruits and veggies on the front.